1. The aim of my chosen charity which is refuge was to show awareness that domestic violence can happen to anyone behind close doors and if you're a victim you should call in and report it to refuge and they will deal with it. I think my campaign did achieve it because at the end we said a speech telling them exactly what to do.
2.My original idea was i had a bigger cast/crew but that had to change because people drop out and i needed to find substitutes. Another thing that i had to change was that i was going to film the flashback scene in the mall but they said you are not allowed to film it full stop so i filmed at my house instead
3. I planned my short film well because the story did make sense. i made it so it happens inside a room which is a strength because it shows domestic violence happens behind closed doors. Also the script that i done was very help full and followed it carefully as i was directing. a weakness of the planning is that some things didn't go as plan because someone dropped out or rain.
4. A strength during the filming is we had good actors also another strength is we had enough camera mans to film different angles for us. a weakness is my house is small so there wasn't a lot of space to move around and get good angles and shots
The message of the film is that anyone can be a victim of domestic violence. It may seem happy on the outside but behind close doors its not. But if you are a victim or think/know someone who is one you should call refuge. The film does work well in raising awareness because my audience learned who to call in a domestic violence situation.
Editing/shots
This is very brief! Although you do identify some strengths and weaknesses, and consider the aims of the charity, you are rather vague on this. What is the message of the film, does it work in raising awareness? did you meet your aims? Also, you needed to evaluate the planning and editing, and some audience feedback. It is a problem that you did not operate the camera for many scenes, as this is one of the criteria that you are marked on. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteYou have added some more information on shots used and editing. However you have not addressed the other feedback given above. Vanessa
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